Dear reader
I am afraid
That the act of writing a poem
Might force me to take a position
Or make a confession
Or both
I know that I should avoid
Adopting a stance
I may regret later
In a world transformed
By the scurrilous germination
Of early spring
Or some new fashion
Oh reader
How I wish
We could simply go there together
Without all this language and paper
And geographical space
Between us
Forget poetry altogether
And take our clothes off
I don’t want to write a poem
To avoid having to make a decision
There is a time for writing a poem
And a time for mowing the lawn
I don’t want to write a petition
Or to pamphleteer on the pavement
Like one of those earnest, hard-working
Well-intentioned people
That nobody likes
No unnecessary paperwork, please!
Dearest reader
I must confess
I am afraid
To be here in my poem
At all
All I have to offer
Are some minor details of August:
Rain
The huddled masses in retreat
Songbirds celebrating the concrete-coloured sky
Cameron Birnie
(Another poem by my son - thanks cam.)
wow - this guy is good
ReplyDeleteAh the clever lad, I mean man. Your son, P. And I get that fear — to make a blog posting, or even a comment. Here now, for all time! Love, P.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem, Pam.
ReplyDeleteI could not stop. It drew me in, it held me close. And the ending is as alluring as its opening and its middle.
Resonant and evocative, extraordinary for a poem that is also a sort of non-poem. Wow.
oh, fun, forget poetry and take off our clothes...
ReplyDeletewouldn't that be a nice world... if poetry just means taking a stance and not exploring something seen...
thanks for this...
Love it! It has a voice and humour and says so much - a step at a time. It walks down the page - it's a conversation while walking. Love it! Thanks Cam. Thanks Pam.
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